2007年4月9日月曜日

私のスピーチ

これは私のスピーチです。トピックは「日本で自転車にのる旅行」です。聞いてコメントを書いてください。

私はこのスピーチがおぼえて、れんしゅうしました。でも、プレゼンテーションの時ちょっときんちょうして、ちょうたつ (fluency) がなかっただと思います。それから、せいちょう(tone)がとてもつまらなくなかったです。だから、私はすきじゃありません。ざんねんですね。

2 件のコメント:

Aikyo さんのコメント...

Chau San's speech is very interesting and easy to follow, all with challenging sentences structures and grammer. You remember your skit very well, there were only few pauses. And you made very good effort to try to engage the audience. Nice speech!!!

Ali Cetiner さんのコメント...

Charmaine,

I really learned from your interesting trip to Kyuushuu. I've never been there so it was instructive for me. It was a very good idea to bring pictures to show the places you've been as well. I read your comment and don't agree with you that your tone was boring at all. You lost some time at the beginning to set up your laptop and that's why you tried to speed up a little during the speech and that caused effected your tone but that was the right thing to do. You clearly practiced a lot for this.

The only criticism I have is that you should have found a way to integrate the slide show in your speech. But that aside it was an interesting speech to listen to and thank you for it!